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I have made a large amount of improvements to my contents page. I have incorporated the editor's note, added more pictures and completed the page listings. There are still a few more improvements to make such as filling up the blank space in the top right hand corner but for now, I am happy with this as my draft.
Good work Jesse. Love the colour scheme .
ReplyDeleteThe two images in the top right corner should be bigger.
I also think you need to cut down on the amount of writing that is on the page.