Final Drafts- Double Page Spread

Final Double Page Spread Draft

Final Drafts- Contents Page

Final Contents Draft

Final Drafts- Front Cover

Final Front Cover Draft

Double Page Spread

Third Draft

Third Draft of Double Page Spread

This is the third draft of my double page spread and I have made many improvements according to my audience feedback. I have completed the article and intergrated more pugs such as the flowers and the large 'FK' down the centre of the right hand page. To finish this page I still need to take pictures of some audience members for the 'Audience Opinion' section but apart from this, this page is complete.

Double Page Spread

Second Draft

Second Draft of Double PageSpread

In this draft I have started to write the actual article about 'Freya Kitty'. However I have realised that if I put text everywhere that I have planned, there will be too much and it may overpower the page. To improve this I may have a page of images or seperate the text more, so that rather than it being all in one block, there will be different, easy to follow sections of text. This will be the improvements I make in my next draft. I also need to add pictures of audience members to incorporate into the 'Audience Opinions' section and complete the quotes in this section. Finally, the images need to be edited in more similar ways as, currently, they look like the 3 of them are taken in completely different lightings.

Double Page Spread First Draft

First Draft

Double Page Spread

I have completely stuck to my layout design for this first draft as I think that it is effected. this is due to the fact that I use a lot of images and the colour scheme makes it visually stimulating to the reader by using calm and subtle colours. To improve I will actually write the article and take more pictures to place in the audience opinions column.

Contents Fourth Draft

Contents Page

Contents

In order to fill up the blank space in the top right hand corner I have shortened my Editors note and replaced the images there with this. I have also added a large picture to the bottom corner to ensure this is not empty.

Contents Third Draft

Contents

Third Draft

I have made a large amount of improvements to my contents page. I have incorporated the editor's note, added more pictures and completed the page listings. There are still a few more improvements to make such as filling up the blank space in the top right hand corner but for now, I am happy with this as my draft.

Contents Page Third Draft

Contents

Third Draft

In this draft I have improved the 'Subscription' box so that it stands out more to the audience and makes more sense where it says how to subscribe. Today (03.03.2015) I aslo took some more pictures for my magazine which I will edit and incorporate into my magazine's contents page and double page spread.

Currently I am struggling to come up with headlines to put on my contents page but it will be finished by the end of this week.

Contents Page Second Draft

Contents Page

Second Draft

This is the second draft of my vontents page. I have added a few more headings and fixed some spelling errors in this draft. To improve I still need to add more pictures and more information overall. This will be complete by Wednesday the 4th March.